第一宗罪：无因果联系 
The author commits a fallacy of causal oversimplification.
The line of the reasoning is that because A occurred before B,
the former event is responsible for the latter.
(The author uses the positive correlation between A and B to establish causality.
However, the fact that A coincides with B does not necessarily prove that A caused B.)
But this is fallacious reasoning unless other possible causal explanations have been
considered and ruled out.
For example, perhaps C is the cause of these events or perhaps B is caused by D. 
第二宗罪 Insufficient-sample 
The evidence the author provides is insufficient to support the conclusion drawn from it.
One example is logically unsounded to establish a general conclusion
(The statistics from only a few recent years are not necessarily
a good indicator of future trends),
unless it can be shown that A1 is representative of all A.
It is possible that.... In fact, in face of such limited evidence, the conclusion that B
is completely unwarranted. 
第三宗罪: 错误类比 (based on a false analogy )<横向> 
The argument rests on the assumption that A is
analogous to B in all respects. This assumption is weak,
since although there are points of comparison between A and B, there is much dissimilarity as well.
For example, A..., however, B.... Thus, it is likely much more difficult for B to do.... 
第四宗罪 all things are equal<纵向> 
The author commits the fallacy of “all things are equal”.
The fact that happened two years ago is not a sound evidence to draw a conclusion that....
The author assumes without justification that the background conditions have remained the same
at different times or at different locations.
However, it is not clear in this argument whether the current conditions at
AA are the same as they used to be
two years ago. Thus it is impossible to conclude that.... 
第五宗罪 Either-Or choice 
The author assumes that AA and BB are mutually
exclusive alternatives and there is no room for a middle ground.
However, the author provides no reason for imposing an either-or choice.
Common sense tells us that adjusting both AA and BB might produce better results. 
第六宗罪 survey is doubtful 
The poll cited by the author is too vague to be informative.
The claim does not indicate who conducted the poll, who responded,
or when, where and how the poll was conducted. (Lacking information about the number
of people surveyed and the number of respondents, it is impossible to access
the validity of the results.
For example, if 200 persons were surveyed but only 2 responded,
the conclusion that...would be highly suspect. Because the argument offers no evidence
that would rule out this kind of interpretations,) Until these questions are answered,
the results ofthe survey are worthless as evidence for the conclusion. 
第七宗罪 gratuitous assumption 
The author falsely depends on gratuitous assumption that....
However, no evidence is stated in the argument to support this assumption.
In fact, this is not necessarily the case. For example, it is more likely that....
Therefore, this argument is unwarranted without ruling out such possibility.
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1. 开头
In this argument,
the arguer concludes/ suggests/ makes a suggestion/
makes a conclusion that…To justify this conclusion/ suggestion/
argument, the arguer points out/ cites that…The arguer also points out/ cites that…
Although the argument/ conclusion/ suggestion seems plausible,
after closely scruinizing this argument,
I find that this argument is logically flawed in several aspects,
which render it unconvincing as it stands.
2. 结尾
In conclusion, despite that fact that this argument seems appealing,
it has several logical flaws, and is therefore unpersuasive as it stands.
To bolster his or her argument, the arguer must provide more information which can show that…
To better support this argument, the arguer should also provide…
To better evaluate this argument, I would also need to know that…